Formal Introductory Letter
Subject: Self-introduction Dear Professor Brad Blackstone, My name is Taufiq, and I am writing this email to introduce myself to you as a student in your critical thinking & communication class. I graduated from temasek polytechnic in May 2021 with a diploma in mechatronics with merit, and I am currently a freshman in singapore institute of technology, pursuing a degree in mechanical engineering. My interest in engineering started when I was just 9 years old when I first visited the Changi Airport. I was initially impressed by the numerous airplanes that were all around Changi Airport. I found it intriguing that such a large, hefty machine could soar thousands of meters above the ground while carrying hundreds of passengers and goods. Being the inquisitive young boy I was, I became curious as to how these airplanes were made and that cemented it for me. I was going to be an engineer in the future. My strength in communication is that I am an active listener. I tend not to
When doing the introduction, it is best to just use the qualification you already obtained. There is no need to bring up about what you are currently pursuing as pitching about employability is about bring out what you already had achieved to convince your potential employer that you are the ideal candidate.
ReplyDeleteLanguage-wise, all are good and excellent from my point of view. Your presentation project good confidence in what you are pitching.